"Can you help me look over my Paper?"

It is time to revise and I need your help. I go about many ways in revising my paper. First and foremost, I write a rough draft or something that I can at least get some feedback about. I was so excited when I first came to USCA because there of the writing room where I can get more assistance. The writing room is like another teacher to me. This place helps me alot in revising my papers. After writing papers for a while now, sometimes I find myself getting out of context or slacking, so I need that extra feedback so that I can bounce back into the just of things. Revising is so important because it shows the professor how effective my writing is. I have a rough draft that is due tomorrow in my English 288 class that will count for 20% of my class just for being done. Of course I will be focus on making sure that I get it in, however, I am going to be more focus on what she puts on that paper so that the final can be perfect. Revision is very important and should be taken very seriously.